Interesting, quite original
Rhythm and guitar hooked me from the get go. The vocal tone caught me off guard but I love it and it totally fits the feel of the song. Secondary guitar work adds a lot and has a cool sound. Really cool song, totally unique and the singer delivers a great performance that had me leaning forward. Great song, can't wait to hear more from this artist.
Reminiscent of Leonard Cohen a little, has a nice left of center feel to it. Seems like it would make a cool fit to a dream sequence in film Nice job, I liked it a lot.
An original lyric about the relativity of time - the "elephant in the room". Catchy tune, well-balanced, confident backing and high recording quality. One to relax to.
Love the simple approach. I get the artistic context. I think this might be popular to your friends and fans. Quirky lyrics are fun. You are on to something here.
not a bad structure to the writing. very simple production could be cooler if produced better, so there is potential here.
I have reviewed this song before and I still like it a lot. The repetition and the monotonous beat is like TIME, again and again. inescapable, we try to avoid time, but it can not be done, It really is the elephant in the room. I recommended a Danish poem about time last time I reviewed this - I think it must be the same, and very clever it is. The Danish poet's name is Benny Andersen. and the poem is TIME. You would like it, it is bound to be on google.