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Margie & Art Corey
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Dear Mr. Scott Paterson, just heard your super cool song, "Second Fall Of Rome", absolutely Over the Top......Sir!!
Tremendous observation of the World in it's present state. It's funny, that it would take a brilliant Canadian Songwriter to point out the ludicrous condition of the world and the Land Down Under, and I'm not talking Australia either!!
We gave you 5 Stars & Likes
M & A Corey/BMI
PS....if you get a chance, we'd be honored to have you hear some of our compositions, you appear to have the same take on the Universe!!!



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to MarcAndersen7798146

how do i hear your stuff?



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MarcAndersen7798146
over 30 days ago to new car smell

True craftmenship



Author
new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

you are smart. thanks.

i agree about the disco one btw.

needs a real singer


cheers



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Sosay Dean
over 30 days ago to new car smell

thanks for the reveiw



Author
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Dear Scott: you blew me away with "Second Fall" and other incredibly original and inspiring works. Now I write with heartfelt CONGRATULATIONS for your Top 20 Finish in the 2010 Six-Pack competition. Way to go man! Although we are not "countrymen" in the traditional national heritage sense of the word, we are nonetheless "countrymen of life" sharing a symmetrical "vision" of how to reflect things we see wrong in the world in need of mirror like reflections through song. I am happy, humbled and overjoyed to have been introduced to your incredible songwriting capabilities and look forward to hearing all of your new work.
all my very best,
your friend
H. Jay Carney

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new car smell
over 30 days ago

you area a true gentleman good sir, i am also very happy to be part of your working circle..very proud to be introduced to it.
I stand in awe of your networking approach..its just superb. you are a lyric machine and i love your fearless approach. as far as the 6pack goes..its still got a ways to doesn't it?

when is it over?

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StarburstRecords
over 30 days ago

Hey Scott....today's high 5's and playlists from same as above. still loving second fall or rome, my all time favorite. created a special separate playlist category for it. all my best, jay



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

I just sent it on



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Patty Boss
over 30 days ago to new car smell

rockin' out to "happy now"

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Author
new car smell
over 30 days ago

I'm glad you liked it. how is life? Busy, enjoying things you're working on? Cheers and best to you..



nw song i hear more influence
i think maybe you know 10cc
like my moped :)

very good guitar play here
smooth rythm player, very few care about quality rythm tracks today
young people want play lead, be heroes of speed balls :)

very very

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A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

Creme LOL :)



new song sound very Klaatu
some people think Klaatu was Beatle secret band
not true
people say Klatuu members unkown
also untrue

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Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

very good mix :)
back vocals perfect, i call you Scott McSmellney

Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

mix master class start session 8

know when live singer know harmony man sing, then lead singer back off microphone 3 inch to allow balance in sound two vocals?
all good lead vocal singer know and do this live, specially big stars, celine, faith, mcartney do this also
singer doing like live mixing, since sound tech cannot keep this type live control real sound

when record, track good level all vocal track
then, when start mix down, always, always, always bring lead vocal down -3 db when harmony sing along, and harmony -2 db below lead
together, the 2 vocal make a perfect -1

when add 3rd singer, drop 1 and 2 down again by -1 db

compress not do this very well. do this with slider on track, THEN compress maybe.

that rule #8
:)

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new car smell
over 30 days ago

very interesting.....very helpful will try. I am putting up more songs... I might as well ... no use them staying in my basement.

cheers

Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

cellar no place for songs
songs like attic :)



i listen new song once more
amazing groove, guitar person should you pay many money :)
vocal have deep compress into master so repair very hard
need good gear or vocal disappear maybe when repair

vera go buy gear today
vera enjoy challenge make devil sound like video game ready
vera go transylvania, buy devil gear :)

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Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

tasmania :)
i always wrong



Author
new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

thanks for the reviews!! Thanks for remastering the song you call Secret smile. That was written and recorded in one day so its pretty rough also it used to have a intro but it sounded just like Let it Be!!! You mix is clean and smooth. thank you very much!

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Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

nit even close to done smelly
not even close
please remember check emails often here

Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

song only have this magic since it was done in one day
has a spontane to feel and more artist should do this way
record, get idea into real world
THEN artist can decide later, re-make, re-master maybe
magic go lost when artist go far away from write day
next day, some feel lost
one week, much feel lost
two week after, writte starts go lost when technic need more attention
no good for pure writer
get idea dwon, not only in brain.
brain sleep, idea go different next day, little
artist startquestion original write, change words
change feel, add thing, become editor, not write person.

new car saleman make magic this way
remember this.



new song very very good vocal track
again, mix is thin but tracks there, mix levels good
can be repaired

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Author
A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

your monitor system, whatever you mix masters on
has a severe problem at the 4k spike
people, amateur mixers seem unaware of this common problem
human ear raises a natural eq spike just above 4k
you mix all do this
can be repaired easy

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A Group Of Unreal People
over 30 days ago

sound like 1954 transistor radio japan make
some time this effect work but never for whole song
sound like one bar effect cut all low end
can be repaired easy, good mix, bad eq



two problem here this Fin ish Sentence song
start have no introduct, voice start abrupt
total mix too high midrange, but even with that all tracks, so can be repair I think

VeraForm has tools
I want try repair but no promise here
I try with some vintage filter and analog compress box
if sound better, i send you again
i like total mix effect, like 60s folk voice sing true story
i try to get tracks music more balance wioth great, human, man voice magic since it not perfect, voice is real man sing real words, in mans real place, to mans real woman

i must try
i download now straight into VeraForm



Finishing
now i tell you how producer, a PRO, listens for a good write
the song, i turn off all the tracks in imagination mine
i imagine you as only write, sit when first write with guitar, in room, or keyboard
have idea, sit quiet, start playing simple chord structure, slow, wondering, imagining

then, wrtier start come alive inside soul, words start come
idea come before because of true thing in life
nowe, writer wants use skill to express simple idea share by all couple
then pain start come, idea grow, write, write, while get just right words, right phrase

pen, paper, some scratching out, some add, cross out some lines
all on one piece paper
paper get full, writer now has first verse and basic chorus, idea become solid
writer flip page covered in what no other could read, scratches, margings, little writing words in small places where paper free for write, so now new page

writer starts remember more far back in past relation, singing, perfecting song
but work still on new words, story grow, story talk to lover true way now, feel all

song now tell whole life, not just write person, but all people.
write person turn on magic equipment, start record basics so feel there from write
next day lose that, writer get basic guitar and voice down

the rest is not write, so it wait, it technical
but, beuaty shines in this way
you are a write person and i would love to watch you in dark studio, alone, through glass, one day maybe.
voice haunt like ghost memory inside me now



friends :) i see now
next i speak i use email
shhhh secret :)



final comment after now i hear quality of write here
i listen heaven now i tell you how you make sound for today
all play be great all track sound great vocal great harmony great arrange also
BUT this reverb hall sound like 1974 how we old always hide this washing reverb our sound

today that heaven still sou8nd perfect but no WASH
please try to get true RnB feel more today
very very tight sound, but exact same mix would be like today
wash reverbs go away in 1981
young people like tight mix now and song lost on today buyer ears
buyers want tight sound for all commerce TIGHT
see?
Vera idiot :)
Heaven this mix can sound so snappy, tight
please listen top ten here RnB or hiphop
now you try to imagine you song with those producer TIGHT sound
:)
you have tracks still in studio canada?



now i hear REAL you soul send to all people
GREAT vocal sound GREAT perform sound :)
MAGIC!!!
thank you now i hear you
i am inside this sound :) :) :)
harmony like 68 Turtle people and like how white people 1968 want black happy sound
amazing thank you
GREAT feeling i add my list HAAA



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Mr Carney:

Love the story of those lyrics very powerful
You should write books. I bet you could crank em out!

The song where it goes is exactly about what you said. You nailed it
I was in new York and 42 street hit me for it's history.
I just saw a saw about getting old and death emboddied as a
Character. But then I saw a guy on the street who had a happy outlook
Even though he was crippled
Depressing song I guess
Cheers and thanks for bothering to notice!



Author
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Scott, is "Where It Grows" all about aging? about losing youth? its great. I love it. you always have something very important to say. you challenge the listener to think. your writing is very metaphorical.

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Author
over 30 days ago

Sorry, "Where it Goes" not "grows".



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Well first of all that is extraordinarily nice of you. As I consider the kindness of your support, I must say that I feel it is incumbent upon us to help each other along. The gifts we have do do this thing we do, however great or small in scope portability, is To me, a wondrus thing, and although I am not strictly a religious man. I do have a strong spiritual impulse which resonates with me daily. However all that being said you didn't have to go out of your way to give me such a nice complement and I truly appreciate it.

As for my politics showing, I apologize if it comes across a little rude. I am a very strong American supporter. Stronger than some of my American relatives. Consider daddy walks as a gentle nudge towards the American military machine. However as a country that has lived and prospered by its protection. It is difficult to, realistically complain. My sense is merely that our time as the Great Western "thing" is changing. We are Rome in many ways. As a religious man you must see it. The absurd decadence, disintegration of traditional value.... I need not go on

Final thing I am going to send you a CD or two, one is a collection of humorous songs. The other one is the new car smell stuff whether they are serious songs, you will have to decide! Any case thank you again for your generous words, I cannot help but think you must be talking about the wrong guy! Look forward to our musical experiments
best, your northern friend

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Author
over 30 days ago

no apology needed whatsoever. quite the opposite. nothing rude at all. i dig your politics. one of the best things about democracy is the freedom to be able to speak out, when necessary and appropriate, to keep this big ship within the correct steering lanes.

like you, i don't consider myself a religious man, in the traditional sense of that word, but i definitely feel plugged into what I see as a new, very powerful spirituality that recognizes that what humans have tried to label as "God" for Millennia has been naive, at best, and abusive, at worst.

psyched to look forward to receiving CD or two :-).

best,
jayjay



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over 30 days ago to new car smell

According to your face book is another extremely well written song. Man, i am impressed! I love your chorus:
Chorus:
According to your Facebook, I'm a loser and a fake
According to your myspace, I'm your number one mistake
So text me if you want me or even send a poke
I guess I'm just a loser and even worse I'm broke

You, sir, have a gift for writing!

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new car smell
over 30 days ago

That's very very nice of you. I just wish I had a gift for making money at it! :)

It seems, well it is actually true that it has been an incredibly long journey with very little reward.
I gave up a while ago but Broadjam has renewed my interest. As I said I have nothing but respect for your talent and approach
Look forward to making some worthwhile music with you
Best scott

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over 30 days ago

take a peek at what I just wrote about you on the 7th blog at:
http://www.broadjam.com/blog/the-6- pack-blog/the-final-stretch/comment -page-25/#comment-15695



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over 30 days ago to new car smell

"When it fell originally, I wonder did they even know?"
Brilliant!!



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Look you are the king my man! Great variety, great voice. Truly great pop voice. Like classic radio pop voice. Its kind of amazing that you are not big. If I can help let me know. I can do stuff
My very best

Scott




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Author
over 30 days ago

Scott, I don't want to be presumptuous and think that your message above is addressed to me, because I'm not really sure if it is. But if it is, I'm basically a lyricist, not a singer or performer.....which is why your work appeals to me so much. Your lyric writing is exceptionally deep and metaphhoric and I love it. I'm always looking for folks to collaborate with - especially singing and performing artists, because I have zero talent into those areas. I'd love to collaborate with you at some point, if that appeals to you. all my best, hjay@thecarneycompany.com



Author
over 30 days ago to new car smell

second fall of rome is brilliant. nice writing. very well done. best, jay

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Author
over 30 days ago

Also love The Hindey Leg. Fact is, love all you songs. Very cleaver.



Author
new car smell
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Very cool that you swim these waters. Its a neat idea for a music fan to think that openly.

What do you do if you are not a writer?

cheers



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to MATT_T

Very nice of ya. Would you mind me asking which song? Where is your stuff!!!! I wanna here...may I demand to hear!

best
scott

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MATT_T
over 30 days ago

I'm just a fan - no songs myself. I sent the comment after listening to Heaven and in the middle of Too Bad I'm Lyin'. I also enjoyed the retro feel of I Feel the Magic and Vegas Comeback.



Author
MATT_T
over 30 days ago to new car smell

Nice laid back pop. I really enjoyed it.



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new car smell
over 30 days ago to Patty Boss

Patty if you eve want to use steady bowling partner fro some reason its yours.

Scott
if you ever need a shitty male singer I is yo guy.

scott

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Greg Moran
over 30 days ago

Patty,
Particularly impressed with "Mind Games". I wish I had the patience to produce songs to the standard you do. Keep at it.
Greg

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Patty Boss
over 30 days ago

Hey, Greg, thanks.. well, i guess the flip side is the amount of time it takes! Would be nice to go faster. That track has some live cello mixed with some virtual inst. cello. I wrote it as a 'relief' to the two 'Congo' chase / thriller tracks I produced at the same time. I'll tag it as a free download for a few days so you can grab it if you like, take care! - patty

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Mike Cannon
over 30 days ago

Hi Patty, Sorry it took so long to comment on your comment about my song, but I had just about given up on anyone noticing my music, so I guess I haven't been reading my profile. But thanks for your kind words, even though my production isn't top notch. I do have 17 songs copyrighted and need to copyright about 20 more, maybe soneday I can get some recognition. I really just consider myself as a lyricist, and not the best performer. I can't seem to figure out how to reach bands that don't right their own stuff. Of course I'm already 63 years old, so I guess I better hurry up!! Ha!!! Best regards, Mike Cannon



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Patty Boss
over 30 days ago to new car smell

I am in love with your song, "Steady Bowling Partner!" - def find you on myspace, too, and thanks for the track and comments!

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Author
3D Swagg
over 30 days ago

wassup come check out our new music, thanks :)



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