Great song, well composed and arranged. Love the sound on the acoustic guitar very full and bright.
Sounds like a demo tape for a John Mellencamp song, I mean that in a good way. Very relatable, very easy to listen to -comfortable melody and chord changes. Every couple has these thoughts and it is relatable. Love the imagery regarding the smolder at the altar
I love this song about the stages of life! It's well-crafted from start to finish, rich with word pictures, a very poignant picture of the history of the couple from young love to raising kids, to empty nest. Beautifully done! Guitar accompaniment is perfect...the song doesn't really need any more. Lyrics are creatively written and original. I heard nothing trite or overused in this song. Melody is memorable and the chorus is sing-able. Like the soft rhyme altar/older. The vocal performance exudes honesty. This is an artist I would go to hear at a folk festival again and again!
What a great love story...vocal clear, guitar was perfect for song.
The true test of songwriting is if the words and music get across with just one voice and one instrument. Does the tune have a memorable hook, do the words say something and match the mood of the melody. You've done this on all counts. Terrific inflections in your vocals and your instrumentation is great. I wish I could do as well.
Loved the lyrics, This was definitely written by someone who has a tremendous amount of life experience. It was honest and that is what makes a good song great. Thank you for the listen.
This is a very heartfelt song. Nice guitar playing and singing. Done in the tradition of folk. A guitar and and a man. This takes a lot of talent. Your dynamics were right on. Nice work, keep it up!!!
clear and clean recording as well as great vocal job sir! like the simple clean acoustic guitar going on. lyrics solid. identifiable and solid hook/title--will YOU still love me?? all the best.
life and living and loving, and the eternal question it's always worth singing and writing about.
Great guitar tone. Although there is just one guitar, the guitar builds and declines and then builds again. I love the chord changes; it's lovely progression. Strong vocal which reminds me very much of Tom Petty. Beautifully mastered....Lovely bright sound. Nice outro.
Really great acoustic guitar tone! Nice, simple recording with basic instrumentation - just acoustic and vocal. The verse set up the chorus well and you didn't take too long getting to the chorus which is very good. This tune could work in a heartfelt movie scene and also just sitting around a campfire. Good job.