Very cool and entertaining tune with a really Dylanesque feel to it, both in the style and the voice. Leaving it acoustic is probably a good choice, as it probably works best that way.
not as simple a folk tune as it begins, simple chords but not a bad thing. like the lyrics "like of hygiene" nice line, and MANY more followed. really liked this song's honesty and true "folk" vibe.
I like the story! You have a good voice.I think you have a good hook sticks in your head!