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My wife and I are troubled by all the world events as of late and thought we could possibly write a song that might transport the listener to a more calming and less frightening place.........Hope it works?
Lots of horrific events are happening in the world presently...it would be wonderful, if we could all have our own Island of Peace and tranquility to retreat to! Our own Nirvana.....Shangri la.........Oasis!
Marg & Art Corey/BMI Copyright 2016 (c)
Everyone needs an island,
Whether it's your home or far away
Everyone needs an island
A safe haven to stay
Oh, everyone needs a home...yes
A safe place, a hide away
Yes, take me to that island
Give me shelter in a storm
Yes any distant port
Oh, a place to keep me warm
Take me to that Island
Yes, take me away
Take me to a shelter
Take me today
Wrap your arms around me
Keep me safe and warm
Yes, you can be that island
And protect from the storm
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Builds nicely, would be great for a film me thinks
Did you like specific instrumental parts-- loved the instruments saxophone was killer.
lyrics need some work. Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1--character, context, setting; chorus--give the big idea; v2--take the big idea further; bridge (if necessary) --take the big idea even further.
Very atmospheric, almost ethereal.
I really like the music to this, great performances or production on the music arrangement.
I liked the musical arrangement. I can hear this in the background in a movie. You did a great job on the mix.
Pretty intro, nice rich sounds. The vocal reminds me of Peter Gabriel. The vibe of this tune is sexy and inviting. Lots of beautiful layers, the pads and acoustic guitars are very well placed. Flute and sax work fits the song well. Perfect drum groove to complement this composition. Great concept expressing love, belonging, tranquility and serenity.
Good intro, like the interplay between the vocals and sax. Nice haunting feel from the song and think it could make a great theme song for a movie/show. Great work
Love the laid back sophisticated vibe of this track.
VERY professional sound.
Moody and introspective piece with a hypnotic vibe.
I liked the way the guitar fades in after the seaside sounds. It's a lovely dreamy track. The chord progression is beautiful. Great vocal delivery. Lovely arrangement. It takes me to the sea. I can really feel it.