You

Song Description

You and I are one

Song Length 5:01 Genre Folk - Rock
Tempo Slow (71 - 90) Lead Vocal Female Vocal
Mood Endearing, Engaging Subject Falling in Love, Relationship
Language English

Beautiful intimate guitar arrangement. I imagine a scene in a small bar in the evening, where a young man listens to a girl's performance and falls in love at first sight.

Really good melody; excellent potential, the strings went well together. Reminded me a lot of Peter, Paul, and Mary.

Lovely, haunting melody and arrangement. Great vocals. Reminds me in style of Christine McVie's 'Songbird' from Fleetwood Mac's 'Rumours' album. This is no criticism of course as your song is original in melody and lyrics. Excellent - I'd like to hear more of your songs.

reminds me of early 70's music

This is a very good song..... I really like the singer

I like the simplicity and sweetness of this song. Very pleasant

Melodically it is lovely song. I like the lyrical thesis of the song. I think love, in the broadest sense, is the strongest theme for a song. Some great acoustic guitar work here.

I liked the feel of the song. It's a good song for chilling out. I liked the guitar accompaniment and the occasional piano you added. The instrumental themes you made added a nice flavor to the production. The parts of the song transitioned well and the overall musicianship was good as well.

VERY PLEASANT GENTLE SONG WITH A NICE TUNEFUL VOCAL , VERY LAID BACK GUITAR WORK PARTICULARLY IN THE INTRO,THE SPARCE INSTRUMENTATION GIVES THIS COMPOSITION A VERY LEASURELY LAID BACK FEEL, THE TYPE OF SONG TO LISTEN TOO WHILST YOU ARE RELAXING IN THE SUNSHINE SOMEWHERE NICE,(I WISH) GOOD SONG AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MUSIC.

I LIKE THE SOUND ON HERE!

Nice sweet sounding voice. The guitar parts sound really nice. This song had a nice relaxing tempo. The lyrics were really nice. Nice song keep up the good work.

Good track , I like it

Please remember that all comments is from personal choice in music. For me personally I prefer a song that tells a story. Beginning middle and end, also definite difference between verses, chorus and bridge.

I like the voice and like the song. The recording of the voice could be better. It sounds like you recorded the song in 1 track, there are a viw mistakes. Overall very well.

Great vocals and lyrical content all round nice sound.

There are parts of this that are memorable...mostly the "You You You" part. Lyrics are clear and emotional. Singer seems believable...kind of a Marianne Faithful approach...little voice.

What a sweet love song...sounded like you did some voice doubling well done...To get a great sound with only guitar and vocal is not really easy..but you did a really nice job with your soft voice..well done.

Now that has a sound of a calm and comfortable song for sure. Good stuff and easy to listen to. The kind, smooth vocal keeps you listening as if having a conversation with a good friend. The sparse piano adds a nice flavor to the guitars throughout. Nice stuff and and great folk song to listen in on. The best to you!

Sweet and simple love song. You have a very pretty voice, lovely to listen to. Favorite lyric: Living inside of me/sharing my heart's every beat. Rhythm guitar is good throughout the song. Pretty good recording (home studio? Am I correct?)

A nice gentle piece, I liked the vocals and the lyrics.

The main guitar to the left sounds nice and warm as it should and the song ends with a nice natural ending rather than a fade out, which I liked.

I can imagine listening and watching this at a music festival and it would fit in very well on a folk stage.

Nice laid back vibe, very easy listening. I like the lyrics a lot and it's sang very convincingly and from the heart.

I think the vocals are great, like the rhythm guitar as well.

This song and track are so relaxing, I have to hear it again, and hopefully be able to read the lyric as it plays. The vocalist I believe has an incredibly wonderful sound and even though I miss some of the words because of a first play, enjoying this performance comes very easily, and what words I do pick out as typing at the same time are new, refreshing, very relaxing and I am enjoying this song which I will indeed listen to again.

Although I only gave this song a moderate ranking, I liked the tone of the singer's voice and the lyrics of the song so I would actually like to hear more songs that she has done. I feel the song would have more impact if it had a tempo change or a bridge that created a mood change. The song became monotonous about two-thirds of the way through. This song would make a good track for a movie or TV show.

Vocals are strong. I would have liked to hear some harmonies on the "you you" parts, though. And a fuller production would be nice, but maybe you were going for the simpler aspect. This would work in film synch definitely.

it's a nice atmosphere, pleasant voice

The recording is feeble, the voice too, although one of the solo acoustic guitar seems mixed a little too high, I think on the left channel. It's quite a lo-fi recording compared to the average Broadjam recording. I like lo-fi things, in a world of loudness war. The arrangement is tendentially bare with series of three notes of piano, feeble themselves, that can be heard in the refrain [or whatever it is]. It's a very languid, nostalgic, melancholy song, in a mesmerizing, ataraxic way. Almost resigned. Reminds me distinctly the feel of Velvet Underground's Pale Blue Eyes. I think that the warmth of this song and recording widely make up for their lack of technical professionalism, and of modern, vivid, crystal clear sound. I like it.

Nice song and sentiment. I like the laid back feel and reflective nature of the lyrics. It feels very spiritual like you're talking to/about God or perhaps even a new baby. If so, cool. Tasty guitar licks in there and real nice sensitive playing. I was lulled in a good way.

Nice gentle feel

I really enjoyed this song. I like the sparse piano accompaniment, really adds a lot and plays well with the secondary guitar. I think the recording could use some work, particularly the vocal levels and clarity of the voice. I had a little trouble distinguishing the lyrics at times because of this. The melody gets lost behind the chords sometimes. But overall, this song definitely has a good feel and draws on universal emotions.

Very nice folk/rock tune with female vocals and great lyrics!

Nice vocal, like the acoustic chilled out feel, a very relaxing song, Nice job!

Lyrics Joe Aschenmeier Music Joe Aschenmeier
Producer Joe Aschenmeier Publisher Joe Aschenmeier
Performance Joe/Daria Aschenmeier
This track is on 1 Member Playlists
Playlist Creator Playlist Name Date Added
HarryBudini Best of Broadjam 3/23/2015

Other Songs By Joe Aschenmeier & Earl Rhode

Song
Actions
Last ride
Rock - Classic
Plays: 8
I'll be loving her
Rock - Classic
Plays: 16
Warm Winds
Country - Traditional
Plays: 14
Easy
Country - Rock
Plays: 89
View All Songs
Clean Clean

Clean Clean

Artist Name
00:00 / 00:00