I'LL NEED AT LEAST SIX WEEKS NOTICE BEFORE WE GO ON TOUR! CATNIP=+=

great vocals nice music good work

This is a beautifully crafted lyric. The musical style is well suited to the lyric. It's easy to listen to, and easy to follow the story line. The chorus -spring and summer lay down, but the winter will rise from the fall - comes across as more negative than I expected from the verses. I know, it's death, but the chorus seems fatalistic. It works fine anyway.

This sounds like a song that might be sung at the funeral of a friend...but it's a terrific story; I really like the word pictures that you painted, especially in verse 2. "Ran, swam, batted the ball" That's what kids do and it made the song real to me. Excellent lyrics. I also like verse 3, which is cleverly written "rumbles and stumbles from below or above, can't tarnish the vision or weaken the love; brother to brother, stranger to friend, it all disappears in the end." VERY creative and original lyric! I love it! Deep, but understandable by everybody...another mark of a good song. Your vocals are clear and understandable. Recording is crystal clear; instrumentation suits song well.

Very nice song. well recorded and the voice delivers the melody with a good feel for the arrangement and lyrics. Nice musical interlude with a tasteful exchange between instruments. A very good professional work.

I really like the lyrics, a well composed poem, and the voice is very good. The song contains and expresses very well the sincere sentiment without any mush. A very pleasant song.

Really liked this. good song well written, performed and recorded. Good separation between instruments in the mix. Solid vocal performance with a laid back, calm projection. I was singing the hook by the second chorus, nice work, thanks.