"Charles Edmund Carter can tug at your heartstrings when he wants to..."
Not the best work you've shown me but as the songwriter you have the right to change it anytime before the final cut for the FINAL submission for the purpose you may have in the goal of this piece of work. Again I'm glad you keep writing as we all know in any profession within the art field takes continued practice and ability to change as life does change when we are living it. The Goal of Why you are writing one particular type or genera, or tempo, or message to rely or for any reason must be in the forefront of your finished product. All songs are products and intellectual property you must look at it that way to know the worth returned once you've released it independently or with a recording contract with an established record label. Keep working your craft. I look forward to hearing more of your work submitted through Pro Reviews here on BJ - Broadjam.com God bless.