Charles Edmund Carter is on the verge of becoming a top writer.
The concept story line of "Comin' Home To You" is good as it follows the title well. There is room for improving in technical issues before it's submitted or published. Know that it may fit into many places once those issues are addressed. Good luck Charles and I look forward to hearing more of your work here in the Pro Reviewing section of BJ's website.
A throwback with universal longing at the heart of the hook, this is solid, timeless songwriting.