Interesting from the outset. Different gets my attention every time. I score a lot of tunes fairly highly on originality but this type of tune really IS original. A bit like Army of Me by Bjork which blew me away when I first hard that incredible tune!
I like the instrumentation. I think the sounds have been well chosen, particularly the percussion and bass. The tune has an industrial feel, which works well. Great sound quality.
Sounds like special effects for a film.
That pulse keeps things interesting throughout. Reminds me of the early years of dance music. Keep it up sure!