Comet (demo)

Song Length 3:29 Genre Pop - Alternative
Tempo Medium Slow (91 - 110) Lead Vocal Male Vocal
Mood On Cloud Nine Subject Loneliness, Stars, Planets, Space
Language English Era 2000 and later

Lyrics

Your sail lies empty, your engines are down - in waves of doubt your hunger drowns
When you're swimming against the tide The long way 'round will see you right

Like a comet caught by the sun, I'm waiting for someone
To break me from this line - I'm burning away my life

Your wings are broken, the light has gone, and gliding drags the falling on
You can catch a thermal, your numbness thaws - the night is darkest before the dawn

'Round and 'round, fading out

See me burn

(C) Greg Frain 2010

This song comes off to a great start with a nice intro, fine instrumentation and good timing of the beginning of the verse. I have a feeling the quality of the recording is not doing this song justice.

A very quirky, original piece.

I can hear what you had in mind (basically it can be a good idea), but I am not sure that this is it? Is it?

good hook on the intro some neat little keyboards run with a good build through to the chorus
quite a quirky vocal delivery but it works actually good counter melodies through this track
its all been put together well and overall some potential

Lyrics Greg Frain Music Greg Frain
Producer Greg Frain Performance Greg Frain
This track is on 1 Member Playlists
Playlist Creator Playlist Name Date Added
Ionut Mirel Udrea Best Pop Alternative Songs 4/23/2015

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