Killer vocals! Love the song and story. Well produced.Well done

The structure of the song is great. The verses build tension and then find release in the 'Oh Yeah' chorus, which is sublime; great use of light and shade there. I like the acoustic vibe of the song and the instrumentation is excellent. Lovely feel to the song, very atmospheric.

Not a bad song at all. Very nice vocals and well mixed.

I love this little ditty. Mary likes the guitar underneath driving, it reminds her of a train sound.We reviewed this one together which we do not normally do and it was interesting because we both picked up on different parts that we liked. We both felt this song could have gone further but in the end the length may make it more desirable. Great job we would love to hear more. Good luck.