dammmmm instrumental is nice lyric is sick his flow is a go
I think this song has market potential if you built it/improved some pretty easy fixes. Overall i dig your flow and would like to hear more of this artist. The quality of lyrics is decent-- I give props to the hook. hip hop hooks with no vocalist/singer can be tricky, due to the fact they call for some sort of break in the general cadence of the verse, and I felt the hook to have a nice flow to it. The Instrumentation is definitely up to par with what's currently out. The vocalist has a good tone in his voice, and the arrangement is straight forward. Overall it's pretty fair hip hop cut. Props for finding a clever way to work lyrics around the synth loop, with the "paper alarm" concept.