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In this song there is an alarm type of sound and when I heard the beat that is the first thing that came to my head was Paper Alarm
The song is called paper alarm which metaphorically speaks about life. Your alarm that wakes you in the morning is your paper alarm you go to work you get paid. this song details things people have done to get paper and the consequences suffered.
dammmmm instrumental is nice lyric is sick his flow is a go
I think this song has market potential if you built it/improved some pretty easy fixes. Overall i dig your flow and would like to hear more of this artist. The quality of lyrics is decent-- I give props to the hook. hip hop hooks with no vocalist/singer can be tricky, due to the fact they call for some sort of break in the general cadence of the verse, and I felt the hook to have a nice flow to it. The Instrumentation is definitely up to par with what's currently out. The vocalist has a good tone in his voice, and the arrangement is straight forward. Overall it's pretty fair hip hop cut. Props for finding a clever way to work lyrics around the synth loop, with the "paper alarm" concept.