Beautiful Sin

Song Length 4:07 Genre Pop - General, Pop - General
Lead Vocal Female Vocal Subject Heartbreak
Language English

Lyrics

Trying not to want you is like
Trying not to breath
I can't believe I fell in so deep

Now I'm broken, I'm on my knees
And you won't even meet my eyes
But I don't blame you boy
I certainly know why

You felt like Heaven
My beautiful sin
I did something I shouldn'tve done
But I'd do it again

You felt like heaven
You pulled me in
I did something I shouldnt've done
But I'd do it again

And trying to not want you is like
Falling asleep
Fighting to stay awake and getting
Lost in a dream

Dream shattered, torn apart
Sky's full of broken hearts
It's so hard to let it go
As I'm falling through the dark

You felt like Heaven
My beautiful sin
I did something I shouldn'tve done
But I'd do it again

You felt like heaven
You pulled me in
It was something I shouldnt've done
But I'd do it again

Pushed me away
And then you pull me in
Tangled in a fantasy
of what we might have been
And if something feels so good
How could it be so wrong
Now all I know is just like you, I will move on

But you felt like Heaven
My beautiful sin
I did something I shouldn'tve done
But I'd do it again, again, and again.....

Trying not to want you
Is like trying not to breath

Hey Ashley

Nice to hear from you.

Firstly have great voice, good range, great pitch. You have some nice texture in there too and a good control.
The hook of the song is a very good idea and some great production towards then end with the synths and additional vocal harmonies and ad libs.
Id like to have felt like I did there through the whole song

Wowza......what a VOICE!! It's such a refreshing vocal and musical adventure, took my breath away from the opening note!! Has a Judy Collins sound & feel. Can't wait to see who this Artist is!!! I'd buy a CD by this Artist in a Heart Beat!! This Artist is ready for Prime time for sure!! All I can say is Double Wowza to the power of 10 and beyond...............

Vocalist is a stellar presence. I could see her finding a lot of work with the right producers. Recording on her was fantastic as well. Very clear and understandable content. This production falls more in the country bracket than it does pop. Pop has changed. Doesn't mean this production isn't a good one. Strong points are the lyrical content and the vocalist. Had a wonderful bridge section that a lot of producers just tend to forget about. Great arrangement for what it is. Covers all of the formula. Needs a little work to modernise the sound for today's radio "top 10 hits" genre but would surely find support with a fan base.

This is a well-executed Americana style song about lust & heartbreak. Great story. Good narrative. Instrumentation, singing, tempo serve the song's story quite well.
This is not my ultimate fave thing, so it makes my comments more valuable to this artist because, nonetheless, it was executed beautifully and sung with heart.

Slick track which is well constructed and has good highs and lows.

Lyrics Ashley Martin Music Ashley Martin
Producer Frank Sorci Performance Ashley Martin Vocals - Steven Walters Guitar
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