Interesting cerebral/psychological stream of consciousness song. Thoughtful lyric writing. My favorite rhyme was trance/glance. You stuck to your subject matter and expressed what you are going through effectively in this song. Nice guitar playing, too. Good mix; I could hear the guitar and the vocals in a nice balance.

Love the guitar sound.

This is a unique and cool song. I think you have some good marketing potential - I could TOTALLY picture this in a Woody Allen type film. Quirky and original sounding, with a very interesting mood created.

A powerful rythem of the acoustic guitar takes this song through the paces in fine fashion. The lyrics are well written and introspective in nature, and bring the arrangement into a fine chorus and hook. The second guitar track showcases some nice lead notes. The build up toward the exit with the synthesizer sounds very nice.