This has a lot of potential for a rhythmic bed supporting a television commercial...it's very catchy and the groove and unpredictable timing is really interesting. the track is repetitive which is fine...the head is good...you might want to try adding a couple more melody notes to your repeated statement but that's your call...overall length of song is right on the money...this type of rhythm track is very commercial as background music...good job
Has a nice feel. The beat for me needs to change up a bit, just slight variations to the back beat I believe would add to the song because the melody and the body of the song is good!