I don't usually listen to rap, so I'm not sure how much I can help you. I like the feel of the song, it moves along and has a good beat.
Well written, well produced and well performed. Great job! Love it!
I like this song. The beat was on and poppin. The melody on the hook was catchy.
Excellent work overall. In a flooded field of mainstream straight up hip hop where one would think nothing could sound fresh, this makes the cut in a major way. It's surprising how fresh and solid the track is considering how well trod this territory is.
The lyric, in particular the chorus/hook is a bit of genius. Absolutely brilliant in conception.
The only problem with this lyric is that you probably won't be able to sing it honestly for very long because you're clearly about to EXPLODE and then it will be ironic to sing about being nobody famous when you are inevitably hella famous!
Competently performed/put together.
nice song.
Really catchy, quality produced song. Great vocals. If you're still nobody famous, I'd be surprised as it's really commercial. Good job.
Great hook and rap performance!! An interesting arrangement as well.