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This song is really wonderful. I was very attracted to the song from the first piano line at the intro. The recording of the track is exceptional in its starkness. I appreciate the fact that you left space for the piano and vocal to breathe. The lead vocalist really connects with the lyric and delivers an emotional and honest performance. It's as if she is not reading but breathing the lyric. She feels it and the listener does, too. The piano and vocal work together and create a gorgeous song. Sometimes when I hear stark recordings such as this the piano and vocal compete for the listener's attention but not here. You have achieved a perfect balance here. I congratulate you! This song would work really well not only as an original release for a pop artist but also lends itself to placements in film or television. It conjures spectacular visual images. I particularly love the vocal interaction in the last part of the song. The vocalist sings some very creative ad libs without overhanging. Her range, timbre and pitch are exceptional. I also really like the spoken "kiss off" at the end. In my opinion, you should consider releasing the sing with this girl as the artist. I hope this helps.
Artist's Submitted Question:
Hi Chris.Thank you in advance:Male or female singer? faster/slower? Please point out any emotions that you felt and at what times. Mix quality? Instrument choices? FX choices? What genre does this fit into? Who could use it? Pitch candidates? Movie,TV,Radio,others? BTW, I wrote lyrics, melody & played piano. Alyssa & Alpaca Ranch Studio recorded - paid/work for hire. Copyrighted. I'm new at this. I generally write melodies. Looking forward to your input!
I like the song as is. Female vocal. The tempo is right on. Pop or film and TV placement. The lyric drew me in from the first verse forward.Pitch candidates: Adele, Maren Morris. I hope this helps.
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This song would work really well not only as an original release for a pop artist but also lends itself to placements in film or television.
Chris Keaton has been pitching songs as a song plugger for more than fifteen years. During that time, he has had his own company and formerly held the post of general manager for the late Barbara …