SHe did a great job Greg ! The negative for me is I feel like during the chorus it seemed like her vocal got covered up a bit by the instruments. During the verses it's prefect. I think he could have pulled the instruments back just a tad during the chorus, or put the vocal more up front. Great idea to have a girl sing it !

I loved this song Greg. It is very clearly produced to be guitar heavy (which I love) but I find it just a bit too much for the vocals, esp in the chorus.
I think if it was listened to again as someone who has never heard the lyrics before, it would benefit from the vocal being brought further forward - or perhaps it's my 72 year old ears! Either way, it's a cracking song, beautifully played and what a vocal - so professional.
Wishing you every success with it.
Bob

Really nice statement without showing what side you're on. Curious about the "artifice" use...I always thought of that as a compliment..."clever"....other than that...you used a lot of words no one ever uses....without sounding pretentious. Love the ease the singer phrases some tough lines....she pretty much carried those lyrics.