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As A true Musician Bringin you something new with an Ol'Skool Progressive Feel and New Skool Innovation of Flava. Stay tuned for more. Peace.
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Thank You for the compliment I appreciate you sharing with me. Am definitely interested in radio play and I will fan you on reverbnation
Hey Fellas I really enjoyed this piece that you have in your works. As A Musician myself I like the Santana Flavor. Hope you will HAVE A CHANCE TO LISTEN TO SOME OF MY WORKS AS WELL. Best of Luck in your present future.
Thank You for the review. And this song was just a trial run for me. I am more of a musician and Artist then a rapper so I believe your review was cool. but to know it has potential I will take it into my studio and re-do it in a cutting edge fashion.
Thank You for the review.
It does have an Old School feel. Exactly what I was going for on the creative side of things. Today's music is not as great as ours was in the past. Thank You for the review I appreciate your advice.
Thank You for your review and I definitely respect your advice and your opinion. This is more so the chorus and background of the song not the lead.
Thank You for your comments on Love Slave-The Instrumental. And you are right on your review. It is a rough draft and I am the hand that played the piano as well as all the parts to my song, working on the finished piece now.
Thank You For The Feedback. Glad that you can feel this. You are right about the Cameo Feel. Love this group as well as all the Funkateers as they are so deservingly called. Parliament/Funkadelic, Bootsy Collins George Duke, The Barkays, Prince, Rick James, The Dazz Band, One Way just to name a few. and actually the song has more to it as well. Would love to stay in contact with you. hope to be a friend and a fan of yours as well.
You picked the greats and the foundations. Sure, let's keep in touch. Wish you the best.
Thanks for review! Nice to meet you! Enzo
Nice to meet you as well. And you are welcome. Hope to hear more from you.
Very Nice Piece. I Like It A Lot.
Thanks Mark. Which piece?
Did he ever say?
Nope, but I'll take the complement anyway.
Thank You for your input on this particular song. And you are right I was definitely putting a Parliament/Funkadelic twist to it. One of my favorite artist and groups. This song was an experimental piece. But I will go back in to revise it but yet keep an innovative and creative perspective on it as well to see where it will go. God Bless you and your endeavors and Happy New Year To You as Well.
Thank You for your Review and Lending me your ear. Much Success to you on your endeavors and 2011 goals. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy Holiday.
Thanks Mark! All the best to you for 2011 too!
Good point, I think that's a good suggestion to have the sax solo again instead of the organ.
Enjoyed your work.
Mark, thanks for your review and input of my song "Thank God the Word is Coming True". Be blessed! Mike
You are welcome and Merry Christmas to you.
Mark, thanks for the review of She's on her own. Always appreciated and helpful. Matt
It was nicely done. Continued success to you.
Thank You for your input.
Thanks so much for the review! It's really encouraging. If you have time, maybe you could review my other song "Stay the Same".
hello Emma. I will definitly do that.
Thanks for the review, it is always helpful. The song was written by my wife's grandfather back in the 1930s. It is being sung to the 4th generation. It never had music, so for legacy purposes, here it is.
Wonderful. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Just to let you know, I listened to your song "Exalt Him" and I think it is beautiful. I sampled a little of the other 3 songs and Ihave to admit...I like "Exalt Him" best. I'll tell some friends about your website.
Thank You ma'am and bless you in all your journey as I ask God to grant you all your petitions.
Hello Kimla, Hope you have a chance to view my profile and listen to a couple of my songs for the Lord. Let me know what you think.
Hi Mark, yes I did have a chance finally to listen and you have a very eclectic style. I feel your music can touch the subliminal part of a person by feeding them the word in a very non-obtrusive way. Keep on praying and writing for there are many people to reach in order to spread the gospel and as believers in Christ we have to provide many ways to reach them through music. God Bless You
Thank You for your kind and encouraging words. And may God grant all of your petitions as well in everything you do.
I like the Farewell to Love Track except the mastering on it could be better. Good Job!
Thanks. Chris for the comment and I appreciate it and I will work on the Mastering. Believe it or not this raw track of Farewell My Love was done. At my portable home studio and not fully completed. So that is a bet.
Hello Roy, Don't know if you had the opportunity to listen to my work, but I would love to get some feedback from you. Have a good day.
Mark, Please see feedback below....Best, Roy
Would be nice if you listened to my music too---any feedback would be useful. Thanks!!
Hello Kimla just wanted to let you know tht I think your song is wonderful. Hope you have a chance to one of mine. Very nice ending transition.
Sorry about the typo.
Nice Piec of work. I really like this song. The Feel is very sweet.
You know the word says that "Out of our belly flow rivers of living water. Let it flow my brother.
Hey Roy how are you sir, I hope well. Well I am just getting things going with my new broadjam spot and I would love to get some feedback on my ballad "Farewell My Love" of course this is in the raw and I will be addding some more emphasis to it real soon. So if you have a moment let me know what you think. Well be blessed sir in all your goals and endeavors will be talking wit you.
Pros: Nice song concept, sweet talking narrative from a man over a track saying goodbye to his woman. Actually, once you get through the arrangement and production, there are the makings of a good song. This reminds me of Exile, Teddy P, Stylistics, etc. Obviously, the writer is writing from a very personal point of view and demonstrates a lot of passion and caring in the song. Because of the passion, you can almost hear what the writer/producer was hearing in his head. Production Cons: Although it is a heartfelt song, which is admirable, it needs a lot of work to be primetime.....Obviously, the song is not fully produced as you mentioned. With that said, I will help head some of the production direction off at the pass.....The cymbal programming is inconsistent and needs work. At 6 seconds it drifts off the beat and continues on and off through the song. Needs to be re-cut as it's distracting and clearly not quantized. It doesn't need to be quantized to be good, but it does have to be played well.....Vocals are buried by reverb. Sounds like it was recorded that way too as the pitch is all over the place and it seems the singer was given a false sense of security during the recording. Re-record it without verb in the phones. If it was recorded without reverb, then pitch correct the track. Singer has good tone, but needs to work on pitch. The falsetto runs simply miss the mark and need to be re-considered or rehearsed.....The thunder claps and rainstorm seem very out of place and used randomly. I would lose these....Lots of editing improvements are needed, such as the one at 2:44 where signal clips and second singer comes in a much higher volume. Another one at 6:04. Writing Cons: It's hard to pull this talking concept off as it's a very dated one, especially when there is no melodic hook. I walk away from this without a melody to hum or words to sing. It seems to go on and on without ever coming back to a memorable hook...And at 7:25, it won't get consideration for airplay. Need to bring it to 3 - 4 minutes and leave the listener with something to sing. Something memorable that reflects the passion and the reason it was written. My recommendation: Find an experience writer and producer who you're comfortable working with. An experienced writer will help develop the song structure. An experienced producer will take this to a whole new level and enable you to deliver what you are hearing in your head. You have a good concept, but need to get some studio and writing time under your belt. I am confident that once you get 20 or 30 songs in the can you will be in another league. Hope this helps and I've love to hear your next version. Best of luck, Roy