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www.youtube.com/watch?v=7CvvKQMC9zE Hello If you have time check out my new recording. New songs coming out next week. Feel free to share or leave a comment. Have a good day!
Thanks for the connect. You have some good selections in your catalog.
Hi Ellen...We're new to Broadjam...3rd day...WooHoo! We saw you are cionnected to Ginger Griffin, whom we instantly came to enjoy. So, we thought we would give you a listen. We sure are glad we did. We're sitting here in our chairs, bobbing our heads and movung our fannies around in the chairs...not a good sight in my (Al's) chair! We love this! It's perky and invigorating...can't sit still while listening! What a fun listen! I "Al) wroite a piece for a video game some time back in the Electronica genre called "Mac & Cheese". We'll post it some time soon. It's the only Electronica cut we have. But, back to yours...sorry! Thank you for the smiles on our face and a little moving of our buns after a long, difficult day...we needed this! Very nice work! All the best & good luck with your music. Al & Di
Thanks very much! I am on a road trip right now. After I get back, I plan to post some new music. I will be watching for your music too!
I have put up a long version of my "Popcorn" song. I got many positive comments about the short version I had done that I have expanded it to a full length song. I hope you enjoy it.
Thank you for the review of my song, "Popcorn" and the good scores.
Thank you for the thoughtful review. Concerning my rhymes, you might want to read some of Pat Pattison's books, especially Songwriting: Essential Guide to Rhyming: A Step-by-Step Guide to Better Rhyming and Lyrics (Songwriting Guides) http://www.amazon.com/Songwriting-Essential-Rhyming-Step---Step/dp/079351181X/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1313255584&sr=1-3 1 and Writing Better Lyrics http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Better-Lyrics-Pat-Pattison/dp/1582975779/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1313255584&sr=1-1 2 . He presents the notions of family, additive, subtractive, assonance rhymes (and more) very well.
Thanks for the tip, Ellen.
You're welcome. And it is a pleasure to meet you.
your tune--popcorn--ha ha--neat little tune--thanxs--joe
monster nights are sweet--ha ha--what a hoot!--really funny--i like it--cheers--joe.
Thanks, Joe. I've been a children's songwriter for quite a while. I am expanding into other genre. Please feel free to leave feedback when you wish.
i was with kate carpenter at her last kids show in charlotte county last thursday--she is a hoot--i love her stuff--i might write some childrens stuff too-i don't know who has the most fun the grown-ups or the children,i have to admit,that sometimes i am not smarter than a 5th grader--cheers--joe.
Hi Ellen, thanks for reviewing "Borderline"...appreciate the comments but the song is pretty well cemented so I'll take your comments into consideration for future endeavors :D.
Thank you for the review of Monster Nights Are Sweet.