Really dig the guitar tone in this tune. Has as very classic EVH tone and twang to it. Sound like some flanger and chorus going on here. Instrumentation is good and has a good flow through out the song.

The drum machine kills the vibe on this song. If you are going to use drum machines, try to make them sound as authentic as possible.
The guitar riff is boring and gets old very fast. I would have liked to hear it go somewhere. The listener doesn't feel the need to care about the riff and nothing grabs the listener's attention to make them want to take a journey with the artist.
This is not a song, but more of a demo of a riff to maybe be used in a song in the future. I think this might be the wrong place to advertise demo riffs.

the idea is good. guitars at the beginning sounded like early Rush.