not sure where this song is going, or what it is intended to be used with or for. not sure i agree with the choice of drum loop/beat, or the use of echo/delay. i get the idea but think there is better choices to be made in that area.

I'm afraid that I heard very little positive in this piece. It took 1 minute to move from the melodic run downs to actually start. I've sat in an A & R mans office and you've got about 15 seconds before they're bored and moved on! Recording quality especially drums needs work. Piano sounds fine.

The drums coming in and out is very effective. I liked the juxtaposition of the keyboard and drum timbres.

Really nice melody, good flow, memorable. Lovely piano part. The arrangement and feel really works.