A Better Man

Song Length 3:36 Genre Folk - Contemporary, Folk - Contemporary
Tempo Medium Slow (91 - 110) Lead Vocal Male Vocal
Mood Poignant, Still Subject Regret, Love for Child
Language English

Lyrics

A Better Man
©Jeffrey C. Ashbaker 5-2013

If I could dance, just like the morning sunlight
And sing like the birds
And if I, could love you with all my might
Would you be my girl
Should I call, should I let you know that
You could be my world
Do you have, a feeling just like I have
Could you be my girl

--- Chorus ---
If you, could find it in your heart just to love me
And if you, would take me, just the way I am
Nothing comes as close to the tenderness that touched me
But I'm sure, that I, could be a better man
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-Solo ½ Verse Break-

If I threw the ball a hundred miles an hour
And I was all you had
If I would believe, and share your higher power
Could I be your dad
Should I call, should I let you know that
You're the apple of my eye
Do you have, a feeling just like I have
Would you be my child

-Repeat Chorus-

A beautiful soft Folk offering. Well sung to a very good story. Nice work on the electric guitar. Very enjoyable.

Always good stuff every time I hear you....

Here's a song of appeal: Would you be my girl? Could I be your man? Then it switches to a father/child. So this could possibly be a "proposal song" to a woman and her child...for them to become a family? Instrumentation/chord progression is easy-going and pleasant. Vocal is nicely performed. Nice production; lovely female background vocals. I really like the verse about "Would you be my child?"

Really good laid back feel to this, great vocal, well recorded and performed. I liked the way the acoustic sat in the mix with its own space, just as it should really. Nice elect break and fills, not intrusive. I liked this a lot, would do well if it fell on the right ears, but that's the holy grail isn't it! best of luck with this song and thanks.

A nice feelgood track well written and performed.

Good storyline.

Excellent guitar work.

Very pleasant, smooth unstrained voice and very lovely, heart felt lyrics.

Lyrics Jeff Ashbaker Music Jeff Ashbaker
Producer Jeff Ashbaker Publisher Jeff Ashbaker
Performance Jeff Ashbaker Label Jeff Ashbaker

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