You've got good ideas and melodies, you just need some help with the production and recording phases of your operation.

Like the retro "96 Tears" feel. Good hook idea

Definitely an original song.

kind of vocals remind me of that guy from the b52s. love the words to this.

This is a tough one. I really liked the style. Sort of a early Roxy Music meets Split Enz meets Talking Heads (hope you don't mind the comparisons - you've obviously have your own musical voice). Liked the chimey intro. Like the odd feel in general and especially around 1:29 and the section following 1:43. Clever lyrics, great concept, theme and vibe.