love the rough vocal, works cool with the simple instrumentation. would like to hear this with a tad more instrumentation, maybe some bass and some build, but like the idea here.

So many movie scenes flying through my mind with this song as accompaniment. Especially with shows Greys and House adopting the strategy of reinforcing scenes with music background.The slow tempo and rests is very effective.
Only class A's so I think the lyric would be cheeky rather than a problem and work as a positive
Terrific song that I hope does well for you

the vocals sound far back is that what you were going for?

Love the vocalist! Man can play. I really like this song. Would love to play some supporting counter melody for this! Great song.