ashes

Story Behind The Song

This is about things that hurt us in the past but it makes us stronger. This is a man's journey from a child to fighting in the war.Ashes are scars from the past that we deal with and just keep going.

Song Description

It's a country story type song.

Song Length 3:11 Genre Country - Traditional, Country - Alternative
Tempo Medium (111 - 130) Lead Vocal Male Vocal
Mood Relaxed Subject Change, Boys, Men

Lyrics

Ashes
(Amy Abernathy 2014)


I was in fifth grade,
Said what's your name?
She said my name is Emily.
Asked her to be my girlfriend,
She said she had a boyfriend.
And his name was bobby Lee.
Ashes, ashes, all fall down
We all have ashes floating around.


At seventeen I fell hard in love,
She was pretty as a white dove.
She broke my heart my senior year.
Said she was moving far from here.
Off to school for a much better way.
There's nothing left for her to say.
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
We all have ashes floating around.

(Chorus)
The things we go through can make us strong.
We just learn as we go along.
Ashes are things in our past,
They burnt us once but fade away fast.
Some ashes will linger on,
Hold your chin up and just hold on.
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
WE all have ashes floating around.


After school I was working hard,
Got a letter from the National Guard.
Went to war, down in the trenches,
Deep in my soul my emotions descended.
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
We all go through pain and get knocked around.
Ashes, ashes all fall down.
We all have ashes floating around.


I came home from war trying to reconnect,
Dreams in my head cause me to disconnect.
I fought for the Good old US of A,
But the battles in my mind still start to rage.
My mind tries to erase all that I've seen.
How can I wipe the slate clean?
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
We all have hurts floating around.

(Chorus)

The things we go through can make us strong.
We just learn as we go along.
Ashes are things in our past,
They burnt us once but fade away fast.
Some ashes will linger on,
Hold your chin up and just hold on.
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
We all have ashes floating around.

(Outro)
Ashes, ashes all fall down,
We all have our ashes floating around.


Written by Amy Abernathy
Copy right 2014
gagirlames@hotmail.com


I like the storytelling to this song. Nice use of a familiar lyric and then building on it. Would like to know how it all ends up!

Musically, this seems a little weak to me. Can't really tell of there is an actual guitar there or it is all synth. Recording is weak also. The lyrics are noteworthy however and song has potential with a little more tweeking.

Singer sounds a bit like Tom Petty. The structure is pretty sound.

I like the lead vocals (very emotional sounding) and I also like the drums.

i thought the message was a good one and the storytelling from childhood kind of made it believable

seems to move nice

This song has a lot of potential, I think. I like the theme and the way the stories support the theme. Taking a childhood game (Ring around the Rosie) and moving into older themes is very clever and original. Good story lines! Favorite lyric: Reconnect/scars around my neck. Excellent! Ashes floating around - another good one. I got a kick out of the fifth grade verse. Brought back old (bad!) memories,ha ha.

just needs a better demo

Good steady beat and a punkish delivery for this tale of broken hearts and broken hopes.

Lyrics Amy Abernathy Music Brent Edens
Performance Brent Edens
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