Very nice melody, beautiful music! Vocals are impressive. Very smooth and lots of market potential. Very encouraging lyrics and chorus. Positive, inspiring song.
This is an amazing confessional song, so honest. I'd rate the lyrics very close to the song "Create in me a clean heart" by Melody/Keith Green. Seize me is a very original way to express surrender (which is of course, used so much). I love the lyrics pain in exchange for peace. Great that you used male and female vocalists, both sang with honesty and passion. This is a great song for special music in church, I think.