Reminds me of Linkin Park, korn, and Finger eleven. Vocals fit well with the music. Good representation for this style of music. Aggressive feel of the music shines through. Good job.
This works. In your face, memorable, rough as hell, good for movie scenes. Look for those that ask for tension, angst, anger. The opening is deceptive. Sounds like it is going to be a keyboard ditty I like that. I predict it will get picked up for some project that really surprises you. Don't always think literally when you pitch it. Like a love story could have an angry scene where this works.