Tirk Wilder

Tirk Wilder

Title: Songwriter, Performer
Genres: Contemporary Country, Rock, Pop, Contemporary Christian, and Folk
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Bio: Tirk shared his creativity and success worldwide when he wrote the theme song for the mega-hit CBS television show, "Walker… read more

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song: Someday

genre: Country - Rock
stats: playlists: 7 | song plays: 60
General Overview
What Genre is most appropriate for this song?

What is an appropriate title for this song?
Someday The Sun Is Gonna Shine On Me

What artist does this song most remind you of?
Blake Shelton, The Rolling Stones

What best describes the subject matter of this song?
Inspirational - Encouragement

What era does this song fall under?
2000 and later

What best describes the mood of this song?
Happy - Exultant

Song Analysis
Quality of Lyrics

Quality of the Hook

Quality of the Verses

Quality of the Chorus

Quality of the Breaks

Quality of Instrumentation

Quality of Arrangement

Quality of the Melody

Quality of the Chord Progression

Quality of the Instrumental Hooks

Marriage Between Chorus and Verse

Marriage Between Music and Lyrics

Quality of the Instrument/Sound Selection

Quality of the Lead Performances

Quality of the Meter

Quality of Guitar

Quality of Bass

Quality of Percussion

Quality of Intro/Opening Line

Quality of the Vocal Pitch

Quality of Vocal Phrasing and Performance

Quality of the Backup Vocals

Quality of Vocal

Quality of Recording (Techniques)

Quality of Mix

Originality of Song

Overall Rating

Quality of the Title

General Comments

Well, the music is as good as I have come to expect from you guys. Again. If this is your band, you guys got it going on. Jake Johnson, your producer, has aces chops.
You also have your chorus with a completely different musical figure than the verses. This is what I was talking about in the other two songs, and it is excellent.
It doesn't matter as much here as it did in the other two songs, but you're still not using the same template in your verses. I will say again that it is really important for the ear of the listener to hear the verses be almost exact in their size and their rhyme patterns. It's very distracting to the listener's experience when they have to figure out where the verses are and where the chorus is.
That is something I would suggest that you make yourself much more aware of in your future writings.
Once again, you are repeating words in your verses and trying to do make them work as rhyme words.
The first verse is fine, but the second verse has two "see"'s, and two "me"'s. It really is a speedbump in the middle of your song to have that be that way. I would strongly suggest that you fix that.
I would also love to see some kind of imagery somewhere explaining what this guy is going through. Or, you could take a look at your own "Artists Submitted Question", and find some family members dealing with demons and addictions that you could tell me about IN THE SONG.
You guys have the honor of being the only ones that I have ever done where somebody put something into the "Artists Submitted Question" area that was a very good suggestion for the song. You did that all three times. I am amazed.
But this is absolutely the best of the three, in my humble opinion.
Keep the faith, keep writing. If you have any comments or questions about any of my evaluations, you can contact me at tirkwilder@gmail.com , and I will get back to you as quickly as I can.

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Artist's Submitted Question:

Hi Turk,
I would like to know if you think the song is good enough to be picked up by recording artists or producers. If not where it could be improved.
Thank you for time. Mark
Watching family members and friends trying to overcome their demons and addictions. With the hope that Someday.....the sun will shine on them and lead them out of their darkness.

Pro's Answer/Comments:

(See above comments, and the comment section for "Friday Night Lights".)

Quote From Pro:

Another emotional powerhouse of a song.