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Randal Dunkle
Rock - Religious
West Virginia, United States
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Good Advice - when you review a song there is a Positive Comment Section and a Constructive Comment section - you don't write the negative comments in the Positive Comments section. I know your new at this but there is a section for negative comments, I noticed you do not have any material of your own for the rest of us to review - maybe you should put some of your songs on Broadjam - that way you can show us how it's done - kind regards!
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David James
Unique - General
England, United Kingdom
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Hi Randal. Thank you for the 5* for 'Wrapped Up In Rain'. Glad you enjoyed the song. Regards.
David
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Randal Dunkle
Rock - Religious
West Virginia, United States
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Your welcome David - that is a great song man! When I heard it I said that must be a hit song and if it isn't it should be for sure, best wishes!
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David James
Unique - General
England, United Kingdom
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Cheers Randal. The song has been placed with the music supervisors for six TV shows. No guarantee they'll use it of course, but I've got my fingers crossed. Thanks again.
David
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GEORGE SLADEK
Pop - Rock
Missouri, United States
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SYEVE: THANKS FOR THE FINE RATING OF REPEAT AFTER ME "I LOVE YOU" & "WE SHOULD FALL IN LOVE"...I APPRECIATE IT...GEORGE
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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Great song. I'd raise the melody line higher in the bridge to help it stand out from the verses.
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Susan Odella
Unique - Soundtracks
Minnesota, United States
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Thank you!
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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Great Song!
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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Great Song!
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Denise Rosier
Pop - Religious
Colorado, United States
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THANK YOU! I appreciate it! :)
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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Good song, but, Your chorus might be more powerful this way
"I'm praying, " Jesus to take my hand and lead me
Down my troubled path today
A path covered with dangers and temptations
Only You an guide my every step along the way"
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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I think your hook and title is Jesus bought Me An Acre In Heaven . I'd rename the song
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Dallas Songwriters
Pop - Easy Listening
Texas, United States
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Like the song overall but needs work. Keep verses the same in rhyme pattern, lyric cadence , and melody. Verse tells the story. V1 and 3 are the same gut V 2 is different. Keep chorus the same every time. So find you number sticker hook, put it in the chorus and keep it the same. Good bridge try putting this line at the end of the bridge "If it's the truth, it won't change." Then replace it in the chorus with your hook "Truth Never Changes" Very nice start, just make a few changes before you go to Joes's with it.
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Joseph Miller
Pop - General
California, United States
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Well done! Nice tune Debra... Joe
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DEBRA GUSSIN
Pop - General
California, United States
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Thank you for your comments, Joseph. Which tunes are you referring to?
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Joseph Miller
Pop - General
California, United States
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You had 2 songs... both of them...

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