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Sorry bro. After reading my comment you must think I'm a jerk. I can't type worth a crap. Just thought a second hook line in the chorus besides See Saw Life would be neato.
Hi Jerry. Love your tune "See Saw Life". What would think about lifting the chorus up a little higher and finding a second phrase in the chorus instead of repeating See Saw Life so many times? I am definitely not suggesting you do anything just giving my two cents worth. Great tune with excellent market potential imo. â'®ï¸
Hey Jerry. Like this time. I am really not a country fan but I took the NEXT STEP and I listened. Great Job. I am glad you recorded that. Thank you.
Thanks Kenneth. That means a lot.
You're most welcome.
Love everything about these songs and
Thank you Deb. Hope all is well!!
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Thanks for reviewing Stunning Lies - acoustic. Regarding the last chorus line, since its not the hook, i'm' not sure repeating it would be beneficial. The hook is "Such stunning lies you tell".