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Hello Gareth & Peter, thx for taking the time to review Passport to Power instrumental. It makes far more sense when you can hear the kids singing:
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.php?play_file=24409_468587 1

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Gareth Graham & Peter Royle
over 30 days ago

Aha! Thanks.



Folks, thanks for you kind review of my song: YOU DO ME IN. I'm the lyricist. You suggested I do more for the chorus, and I appreciate it. Would you elaborate on that please.
Much success to you.

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Gareth Graham & Peter Royle
over 30 days ago

I think it comes down to contrast. The intensity of the vocal is nearly the same as the verses. Id like to hear more energy/passion in the chorus.

Kindest Regards

Gareth



Thanks for your review please feel free to check out a few of my latest releases via my profile page here on broadjam.



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