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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

check out my official facebook page! www.facebook.com/officialchristophe rdean



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Al Hovden

Hi Al,

I wanted to invite you to check out my music at my page, it would be great to hear from you!
I've just recently signed to LPW Records and now writing my album.

Hope to hear from you soon,

All the Best,

Christopher Dean



Hi,
Thank you for your awesome review of my song "anymore" very much appreciared!! please feel free to check out my other songs and let me know what you think :-)



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Roy Elkins

Hi Roy!

I wondered what you think of my song "found you" ?

thanks,

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Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

I love the singers tone on this. Very refreshing and lightly passionate. The lyric is very simple that everyone can relate to.
The opening line "Looking back on my journey" is a good opening line, but feels like it was forced to fit the phrase. I would recommend doubling up the syllables in this first phrase as the chorus has the same "long vowel" phrasing, where it works better with the melody at that point in the song. The second half of the first verse feels much better. You may try switching these two around and start the song with "Maybe there was something.....".....The set-up to the chorus at 40 seconds is excellent. "I found myself with you" is very good. Lyric, melody and progression work well together here. This part is very strong.....Real nice stretch to the falsetto in the chorus, "I can imagine....". A good memorable melodic hook here as well.....At 1:30, the vocalist drifted off the note on the word "me". I would fix this if you re-cut.....I love the falsetto at 3:00, possibly a little too much pitch shifting. I might pull this back a bit.....Bridge is good.....Song is slightly long, and I think you could start your fade at 3:50.
If I was producing, I might add some strings in the set-up and chorus. The guitar sounds and performance are subtle and tasteful. The guitars certainly know "what not to play". Meaning, it would be very easy to overplay on a song like this. I do like your production and sound selection. Good work.
Overall, this is a very good song. Just a couple of small tweaks are needed. I really like this and congratulate you on a very well done song.

Roy

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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago

thank you so much Roy! thanks for the advice also! btw im the singer on all my music :-)

thanks alot!

Chris

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Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

Christopher, You are welcome....your tone is very good. Keep writing.....Best of luck, Roy

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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago

Thank you! :-)



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Melsi
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Enjoyed Hurts Me, nice melody and vocals and well done with your songwriting results! Keep going, you are on the right path!! Melsi

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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago

Thank you Melsi!!



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Melsi
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Christopher, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments on Little One. The vocalist and musician is Marijan, a German folk singer and songwriter, and I wrote the lyrics for him about the feelings a father has for his newborn daughter. Thank you again, and glad you enjoyed it. Wishing you well, Melsi



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waleed hadi
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

hey chris, could you take a listen to my song "Some things never change", let me know what you think. Thanks!



Hey Todd!

thank you for the review on my song "found you"..

cheers! :-)

Chris



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Roy Elkins

Hi Roy! You mentioned to drop you a line on here to invite you to listen to my new song "found you"

Let me know what you think :-)

Thanks,
Chris.



Author
John Lord
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi, Chris, It's hard to understand why you said that my song "Courageous" was not your thing (in your review on May 22) when your material is in very much the same kind of style. But I respect your view and ... I do like your songs! :o) Regards, John.



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Very sincere vocal, this song has great depth!



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hello Chris...I totally love your song "It Hurts Me When It Hurts You" Very moving beautiful song with great dynamics.This latest mix sounded very good to me and and I can envision this work becoming a hit. Great job by all involved! Penny



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Damon Bray

Hey Damon,

Thank you for your great review of my song "anymore" :-)



Author
SAB Records LLC
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Christopher,
Hurts me: Overall a Nice track... very moody... Production is a bit safe! A better Bass and Kick drum mix/EQ would help with the little bit of muddiness on the low end. The production could have started to build a little bit earlier in my opinion, maybe some strings by the 2nd verse... but that's all it is, just an opinion. Regarding ANYMORE: More on Point with the Production... Definitely a difference is quality between the two songs... This track is polished... On another note... if you are going to be a writer, you may want to expand your style... Work on various styles as I've noticed a common feel to your melodies... Would like to hear how you write outside this vibe... Very good work... keep growing... Definite possibilities. Peace & Best Wishes; SAB Records



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Eamon Ireland
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Well done Chris,

All the best,

Eamon.



Author
E.J. Dease
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Chris, Thanks for your GREAT comments about "Cowboys" the song was written and produced for me by Chuck Murphy and I am sure he feels the same way



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Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Song: Hurts Me.....
Pros: Nice unique voice and decent pitch, but the singer sounds a little tentative. Very good melody in the chorus set-up. Nice arrangement and sound selection. Song is good.
Cons: Needs to be remixed....Vocal is strong in the verse and gets lost in the chorus....If I was producing, I'd experiment with 6 - 10 BPMs faster to help with the vocal tentativeness.....Remix on a different and smaller set of speakers.....Overall: Good song that could be great. However, I didn't walk away remembering the hook. I think it's heartfelt and has passionate lyrics, but I'm not sure the hook is sticky. Hope this helps....Roy



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RAEN
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Thanks for great review, unfortunately we have given up after 6 years we have not been responded to well enough to get into the charts on the radio, espeially in Australia. Did well in UK. Love RAEN



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Steve Howard

Thanks alot for the comment Steve! I hope i do well :-) I hope you except my connection.



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Steve Howard
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Chris, Thanks for your comments about "Should I Run" I'm glad you liked it. By the way having listened to "Hurts Me That It Hurts You" I'm sure that it will do well in the UKSC as its an excellent song. Keep the faith my friend. Steve



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to JD Dohnal

Love your song "Falling" Great work man!!!
All the best!
Chris.

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JD Dohnal
over 30 days ago

Hey Chris, thanks so much for the kind words--I sure appreciate it!! All the best to you as well!! *****JD



Author
C.L. music.
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Thank you for the nice review Christopher....very kind of you.Keep up your good work.
C.L.MUSIC
Claude



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Steve Howard

Hi Steve, just listened to your new song "should i run" it's very catchy!! nice melody! well done man :-)

Chris.

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Steve Howard
over 30 days ago

Thanks Chris. I've had a listen to your UKSC entry "Hurts me that it hurts you" a really good song. Should do well in the competition. Steve



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Steve Howard

Hi Steve!
No problem :-)
Yeah it is a small world! lol, All the best,
Chris.



Author
Solange892
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Christopher ! how are you doing ? thanks for the add , Marie



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Steve Howard
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Hi Chris, thanks for your review of my song "It's You". Nice to see you on Broadjam as we are already friends on Myspace. A small world indeed. Keep up the writing my friend. Steve



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

I'm never certain who's site to leave message on LOL...You are welcome Chris...Keep up the wonderful work and stay true to yourself. I will look forward to hearing "Found You". Have fun in the studio!



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Christopher Dean
over 30 days ago to Penny Towers

Hi There,

Thank you for your comments on my music, really means alot thank you!
All the best!
Chris.



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

"Anymore" another thoughtful, feeling musical force of a song....! Had it's own feel and power!



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Christopher Dean

Char my 20 year old dove DOES influence me Chris..to a degree anyway, since she is magical in a certain sense . She is to me anyway....Both Char and I love your song and that is our collective and separate opinions...I ( and Char too) look forward to hearing more of your work!



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