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Wayne Ammons
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Shane
Love your sound. Please check out our songwriters festival page:
http://www.mssongwritersfestival.com/ 1



Author
Randy Bishop
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Hey Shane- Happened to hear your song, "A Few Too Many" because it was "considered" on a licensing opportunity I'd also submitted to. Just wanted to tell you....that song ROCKS!! Really nice production. You deserve to win it.

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hey Randy, Glad you like my song. I'ts one of my favorites to jam on Live. I hope it cuts it for the licensing deal. You can listen to the whole album that "A Few Too Many" is on - on my website. www.shanemartin.com.
keep in touch and keep rockin'...
Thanks
Shane Martin

Author
Randy Bishop
over 30 days ago

Will do, Shane. Good luck!



Author
Runar Bang
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Hey Shane, well written song and great production! Deserves the Grand DSA price.



Author
Bluntkid
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

hey shane.........you've not given me any feed back bout my song................i've been waiting for like one week now



Author
Bluntkid
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Hey, congratulations man, you were awesome, just keep it up

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hey Empire,
Thanks for the congrats. I'll be looking into your song you sent soon. Been busy performing. Keep in touch.
thanks

Author
Bluntkid
over 30 days ago

Okay, i'll be expecting your mail

Author
Bluntkid
over 30 days ago

hey shane,
well its been 3 days since i sent my song and yet no reply, whats happening



Author
J Nelson K
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Congrats on the Grand Prize Win ... Just listened to "No Hard Feelings" ... It's got it all ... Great Job and Best Wishes For Wherever Life and the Music May Lead You Next ...

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Thanks for the congrats and best wishes, glad you like my song. Means a lot coming from a fellow song writer. Keep in touch and keep writing. There"s always a new one to write.



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Shane Martin
over 30 days ago to Roy Elkins

Hi Roy,
Shane Martin here.
I have not received an e-mail update on the grand prize winner for the Dallas Songwriters Song Contest. I saw on the DSA site and I'm excited that my song "No Hard Feelings" is the grand prize winner. And I checked the Broadjam link and it says winners not available yet.
How do I claim the prizes for the contest?
I see in the Broadjam Rules that: "Arrangements for receiving all prizes, unless otherwise specified, must be made within thirty days of announcing the winners." Have they officially announced the winners yet? I see on the DSA site a date of Thursday May 19th - Is this the date of announcing the winners? The grand prize winners were not posted up there last week.
Please explain and let me know how to claim the prizes.
Thanks for the opportunity.

Shane Martin
Singer/songwriter

www.shanemartin.com
612-325-5161

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Author
Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

Shane, DSA has posted the winners and you can reach them at info@dallassongwriters.org. I will send you a private email as well....Congrats again! No Hard Feelings is a great song......Regards, Roy

Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Got you re-mail. thanks for the quick response and thanks for the good words on my song. I'll wait to here from Barbe.

Author
Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

This song is one of those where it's just nice to listen to without the analysis that we writer/musicians typically impart. Certainly every song has strengths and weakness, but just about every word and syllable in this song is right where it should be. My sense is that this song was written by someone who has composed a lot of songs. This is so well crafted that one has to dig to find a problem with it.

The lyrics in the first verse set the stage for the song nicely. The melody in the verse is very skillfully understated, then at 40 seconds the setup for chorus brings some melodic intensity and you feel that something great is imminent. The melody and lyric in the chorus, especially the first two lines are perfectly married and unforgettable. The syllables work perfectly with the melody. Also, at 1:29, I love the line "I drowned in the bottle for weeks...".

Although I think the opening verse is good, the opening line is not as strong as it could be, I might have changed the opening line around where it starts with "Laughing like she had no scar while hanging out at the corner bar". I think it would have made the intro a little more unique and visual. But that is my only suggestion for this song.

From a commercial perspective, this is a song that any artist could sing and has strong crossover potential as well. This could be sung with an acoustic guitar, sitting at a piano or it could be a good instrumental as well. I can close my eyes and hear numerous productions of this melody. That's what makes it great. I would love to hear more from this writer as my assumption is he/she has some other good stuff in the can. Great job and congrats!

Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Thanks for the great comments Roy. I love writing songs that can strike a chord with people and performing live. I'm looking to reach new fans with my songs and voice and I appreciate these types of opportunities to get my music out there. Thanks again !!!



Author
Bluntkid
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

hey shane... nice song ''better than this'' it was magical....... we could work together u know

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hi Empire Owen, I'm glad you liked my song "Better Than This". Are you a song writer? Let me know what your up to and what you are looking to do. Check out my website for more about me and to hear my latest album "Rewind"
www.shanemartin.com.
Thanks and keep in touch.

Shane Martin




Shane, congrats on "Something About Your Way" selection on the pop/rock listing!



Author
Pete Papageorge
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Hi, Shane: Congratulations on your song, "Cover Me," I loved it! Great writing, performing, and production. Best of luck!

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hi Pete, I appreciate the nice review and glad you liked my song. Have a great New Year. Spread the music. Thanks.



Author
Wayne Ammons
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Shane, Congratulations on your "Rewind" CD. Well written songs & good arrangements with excellent production values. Really like your vocals. Your material, performance and approach is impressive. Good luck to you.

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hey Wayne, I appreciate the good words especially coming from a singer/player/writer like yourself. Just trying to get my music out there. I like your sound as well. Thanks for listening and spread the music. Have a great Thanksgiving.



Author
Hank Thomas
over 30 days ago to Shane Martin

Hey Shane,
"Somewhere Real"! I can hear Big & Rich doing this one, Well done.
Hank

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Author
Shane Martin
over 30 days ago

Hey Hank, Thanks for the good words. I appreciate it coming from a fellow musician/songwriter. Check out my other songs from my latest CD "Rewind". I like your "Eagle" - nice melody. Spread the music. Thanks and keep rockin'



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